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the fete
Posted by: petersz (67.188.236.---)
Date: February 01, 2012 08:04PM

the fete

a little artaud
by the light in the window

a smudge of liquor at the feet
of the buddha

we dance in the circle
falling down for ourselves

the grass is still wet
it smokes in the morning

the weight of the world
around her neck

the pot on the stove
sings to itself

the magic of a poem
no one has heard

rests in our ears
as we watch for the night


Re: the fete
Posted by: frost42_24 (12.46.250.---)
Date: February 01, 2012 08:22PM

how romantic.

Ahhhh. I like this very much and I feel like it's a side of you that you don't usually share in your writing. Methinks you should show this more often.


Re: the fete
Posted by: frost42_24 (98.227.4.---)
Date: January 03, 2013 11:42AM

bump


Re: the fete
Posted by: petersz (50.136.226.---)
Date: January 03, 2013 12:24PM

thanks, after a year, I too am glad to read it.




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