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Singing Goddess II
Posted by: The Great Brandoni (64.24.223.---)
Date: September 24, 2002 11:44PM

Your words,
like God’s own breath,
fill my heart with delight.

Your smile,
as if conquering death,
makes the darkness bright.

You are joy.
You are compassion.

Your singing deploys
the most heartfelt passions.

love
devotion
desire
emotion

You make me warm inside.


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Re: Singing Goddess II
Posted by: Sargirl (24.194.192.---)
Date: September 24, 2002 11:55PM

Sweet
very sweet
smiling smiley
Sargirl


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Re: Singing Goddess II
Posted by: J.H. SUMMERS (205.188.208.---)
Date: September 25, 2002 01:54AM

G.B, Like this one a lot, especially the last line. jhs


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Re: Singing Goddess II
Posted by: JP (208.1.86.---)
Date: September 25, 2002 02:30AM

Great Brandon, Liked everything except 'deploys', just didn't seem to fit, but I'm tired and don't have any suggestions. JP


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Re: Singing Goddess II
Posted by: The Great Brandoni (64.24.223.---)
Date: September 25, 2002 05:12AM

thank you sargirl and jhs... and i shall definately like to hear any suggestions you may have jp. i love poems that make you feel good. hehe.


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Re: Singing Goddess II
Posted by: Nolon (209.206.158.---)
Date: September 25, 2002 06:25AM

sweet greatly written no wonder you are the great smiling smiley

"To write something, you have to risk making a fool of yourself." Anne Rice


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Re: Singing Goddess II
Posted by: Brandon (24.127.33.---)
Date: September 25, 2002 03:17PM

hehehe. thank you noloco.


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Re: Singing Goddess II
Posted by: Sargirl (24.194.193.---)
Date: September 26, 2002 05:04PM

smiling smiley
still cool


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Re: Singing Goddess II
Posted by: Brandon (24.127.33.---)
Date: September 26, 2002 07:33PM

hehehe. thanks sar.


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Re: Singing Goddess II
Posted by: kellygirl (162.119.232.---)
Date: September 26, 2002 07:51PM

Lovely Brandon...such a visual I'm getting!


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Re: Singing Goddess II
Posted by: Sargirl (24.194.207.---)
Date: September 26, 2002 08:41PM

lol
I am tired!
winking smiley
You are welcome!
Sargirl


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Re: Singing Goddess II
Posted by: JP (208.1.87.---)
Date: September 27, 2002 01:17AM

Reveals, unfolds, betrays.


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Re: Singing Goddess II
Posted by: silent siren (213.61.44.---)
Date: September 29, 2002 05:02AM

Awwww...Beauteous! If I could just touch that with MY voice!
silent siren
who will have her very first masterclasses in singing next week thursday (shiver!)


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