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Time
Posted by: Bonnie (198.81.26.---)
Date: August 29, 2002 12:48AM
My son started journaling earlier this year, as an example set by myself, and he has been sharing what he has written with me. This is something he wrote, and I found it to be quite poetic, in a way. It may not be the profound poetry you're all used to, just keep in mind...he was only 8 when he wrote it. 
Time
Years pass and clock hands turn.
Hours and hours.
This pattern is called time.
It’s hard to predict.
~Bonnie
Re: Time
Posted by: Bonnie (198.81.26.---)
Date: August 29, 2002 12:49AM
Oops, I accidentally posted it twice. Sorry.
~Bonnie
Re: Time
Posted by: J.H. SUMMERS (64.12.96.---)
Date: August 29, 2002 08:06AM
Bonnie, Shows a lot of perception for eight. jhs
Re: Time
Posted by: les712 (68.189.77.---)
Date: February 04, 2013 12:04AM
Not bad for an eight year old. I wonder what type of writing he could do these days.
Les
Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 02/04/2013 12:05AM by les712.
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