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A poem worthy of a dariy
Posted by: Sargirl (---.maine.rr.com)
Date: August 25, 2002 11:56PM

WARNING THIS POEM IS EXTREMLY CHEESY, AND MAY CAUSE SEVERE VOMITING IF IT DOES NOT YOU ARE LUCKY.

Star Struck
All the girls they fall for you
But not just for your supple body
It's every thing about you
That makes you such a hottie

Now mind you looks do help
We like your height and build
And those big bulging muscles?
Well they sure don't leave us chilled

But what really sends us over
At least for me it's true
What lies within your mind and soul
All your feelings red to blue

The way you speak and act
The smile upon your face
Your creativity and ingenuity
You almost always know your place

And even when you goof up
I can see the way you shine
Like the brightest star in the sky
The one we all call mine

Just for the record there was another stanza, but it kind of fell apart. This poem started out about a concert I went to, but it ended up describing all the nice guys I know in one way or another. So, I figured that I should post it, cheesiness and all, just so all of you could make yourselves feel better knowing that no matter what you write there will always be a cheesier poem out there.

+Sargirl+


Re: A poem worthy of a dariy
Posted by: Brucefur (---.ok.shawcable.net)
Date: August 26, 2002 02:33AM

Wine with this cheese anyone?

My favourite verse was:

All the girls they fall for you
But not just for your supple body
It's every thing about you
That makes you such a hottie

It had me killing myself laughing. Good job with the humour there Sargirl.

B


Re: A poem worthy of a dariy
Posted by: Sargirl (---.maine.rr.com)
Date: August 26, 2002 09:18AM

Thank's Bruce!
Sargirl




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