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it has power over all of us
Posted by: Snark (---.okld03.pacbell.net)
Date: August 23, 2002 06:47PM

here is another

Ode To The Laptop

Your quiet hum fills this head of mine,
the noise of a force hungry for attention
the screen so radiant, my offering is time,
my sacrifice, thought.
Life would not exist without this e-power of thine,
and yet headaches are given
from basking in your omnipotence.
Medicine is required, but then I come back,
once more to live and die in a nanosecond.


Re: it has power over all of us
Posted by: Sargirl (---.maine.rr.com)
Date: August 23, 2002 08:58PM

he he, this sounds like my spare time!
sargirl


Re: it has power over all of us
Posted by: les712 (68.189.77.---)
Date: February 03, 2013 07:18PM

Nicely done, Snark.

Les




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