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as a window of love
Posted by: cliffordwayneduncan (63.107.251.---)
Date: August 23, 2002 07:36AM

as a window of love to ones heart,
to show her love is like art,
not just in words that come from the,
but of passion and fire that set's you free,
to open up once again,
to feel thy love to have a friend,
all the misters in the world-there is none like you my baby girl,
to hold your heart to understand,
there is a love-that never ends,
like the lord up on high,
within his love we will fly,
like a angel in the world,
to help others i need you girl,
to be with me--as one,
we have so much work- that most be done,
as a window of love ,
to your heart,,
just open it baby-- thats your part!

cliffordwayneduncan


Re: as a window of love
Posted by: Sargirl (24.194.193.---)
Date: August 23, 2002 05:25PM

Wow, I like this. It is very cool, but what is up with the doubble comma?
sargirl




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