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Two New
Posted by: lgreen (---.client.attbi.com)
Date: August 11, 2002 06:24PM

Moon Shadows

As the moon rises
And floats across the dark night
I dance in its glow.

Lgreen 08/11/02


Promise

I made a promise
From the bottom of my heart
It still remains true.

Lgreen 08/11/02

Someone stop me--these are fun to do..........Ell
There got those out of my system...


Re: Two New
Posted by: J.H. SUMMERS (---.proxy.aol.com)
Date: August 11, 2002 07:11PM

Ell, Very haikuish. Liked them both. jhs


Re: Two New
Posted by: JP (---.essex1.com)
Date: August 12, 2002 12:58AM

Hi Ell, Haiku, I'm sure are a great art form, but I must confess I have never been attracted to them. Yours are nice though. JP


Re: Two New
Posted by: Stephen Fryer (---.cache.pol.co.uk)
Date: August 12, 2002 02:32AM

Haiku are snacks and I prefer meals.

The geese flew over.
Uplifting sight - which I missed,
Counting syllables.

- N J Warburton

Stephen


Re: Two New
Posted by: lgreen (---.client.attbi.com)
Date: August 12, 2002 03:22AM

I prefer meals also---they are just fun to do once in a while---sort of restraining----but interesting...Ell


Re: Two New
Posted by: les712 (68.116.81.---)
Date: February 21, 2013 11:04PM

A couple of nice haikus.

Les


Re: Two New
Posted by: Gwydion2 (99.199.110.---)
Date: February 24, 2013 11:23PM

I agree


Re: Two New
Posted by: Merc (174.126.181.---)
Date: March 22, 2013 02:38PM

I had dinner with Ell and her spousal unit in Denver oncet about the time this was written and or posted. Couldn't make contact after that. Maybe I should have not spit between my boots at the supper table. Miss this girl,, and 'member Kellygirl? Let's float her again too..


Re: Two New
Posted by: Boo Cipher (184.151.231.---)
Date: March 23, 2013 03:00AM

Kelly has gone professional in the poetry world, so while we might get her rubbing elbows, I doubt that we will see new work from her here.

I believe I have her email address, so I will try and track her down.




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