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Tom Waits Knows
Posted by: Jay (---.yorkton.com.203.129.216.in-addr.arpa)
Date: August 07, 2002 04:43PM

It's hard to dance
when it's cold and there's no music

All you can do is wear layers
of clothes
'cos nobody takes you seriously
when your teeth are tapping like typewriter keys

Go down to the corner
for a cup of black warmth
bottomless and thick - does the trick
but, you don't meet nice girls in coffeeshops

So, you walk home alone
your feet leave craters in the snow
filled in before you take your next step
nobody knows you were there

At home, it is there
on the mantle

You love your baby and always will
ever since you put her picture in a frame

So clap hands
wherever you are
and think of cold fingers
on that old guitar

your heart is in your shoes
but your feet are cold
nobody understands

but, Tom Waits knows.


Re: Tom Waits Knows
Posted by: Brandon (---.we.client2.attbi.com)
Date: August 07, 2002 05:02PM

beautiful. i enjoyed it very much. i wish i could write something so poetic.

as a man thinketh in his heart, so is he


Re: Tom Waits Knows
Posted by: rikki (---.wc.optusnet.com.au)
Date: August 07, 2002 07:34PM


Lovely, Jay.
I'm still on a high after going to a tribute concert a couple of nights ago called "Tom Waits for No Man". Not as good as the real thing of course (i hope he decides to visit oz again sometime soon) but still three hours of bone-rattling music and heart-wrenching poetry. No one else can say it like Tom can.

'pretend that you owe me nothing
and all the world is green..
the moon is yellow silver
on the things that summer brings
it's a love you'd kill for
and all the world is green
balancing a diamond
on a blade of grass..'

r smiling smiley


Re: Tom Waits Knows
Posted by: J.H. SUMMERS (---.proxy.aol.com)
Date: August 08, 2002 02:39AM

Jay, A visual delight, thanks. jhs


Re: Tom Waits Knows
Posted by: Sarah Lenarz (---.mn.rr.com)
Date: August 08, 2002 02:49AM

So very lonely- I could hear the snow crunching under the person's feet. I loved it, Jay. Who, by the way, is Tom Waits? Is it a person??
Sarah


Re: Tom Waits Knows
Posted by: les712 (68.116.81.---)
Date: March 12, 2013 02:29PM

Nicely done, Jay.


Les




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