Ice blue pools
Gaze at me in liquid laughter
Reflecting the stars,
Diamonds lost in the folds of velvet eternity
Refraction flares,
and the fire of the sun
is frozen in his eyes
forever.


this one's really not done, i've got some ideas that i can't quite put into words yet...

~J

daaaaaaaaamn! good sh#t. Like the metaphors. I love imagery, sighhhh
Lizz

signing off, going to sleep!
Lizz zzz zzzzzz zzz

j-

"Gaze at me in liquid laughter" - i really enjoy this line.

i love poems about eyes...

ya rock,

skye

j: very nicely done as is--I too like poems about eyes...lgreen

J,
Metaphorically marvelous.

;-)>

-Squire

sigh is right liz. he done gone campin'
but anyway, this guy's got the most beautiful eyes, so naturally a poem happened.

~J

sigh is right liz. he done gone campin'
but anyway, this guy's got the most beautiful eyes, so naturally a poem happened. glad you all like it as much as i do, very gratifying.

~J

You're repeating yourself. you're repeating yourself!
Lizz
PS, Picked a good favorite word, didnt I?

great poem! I love eyes...
sargirl

glad ya'll like eyes. i do too.

~J

This is a very good start. I look forward to reading the finished product.

The sky is something we try put into words so often. Honestly, this is one of the best night sky metaphors i've seen:

"Diamonds lost in the folds of velvet eternity"

Thanks.

Would you like those eyes with some chocolate and coffee there Jex?

:-)

i know the subject, never thought THAT way, but i guess could be bou any blue eyed devil. moving

ja ja