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sunset
Posted by: Mr yuck (---.tnt3.fredericksburg.va.da.uu.net)
Date: July 18, 2002 01:38PM

the sun comes to a point on a leaf
and it reminds me of nothing
but when it brings to light my flaws
it reminds me of a spotlight

set on high and burning fiercly
so very bright and a little too near me
it see's me,knows who i am and what i do
and it knows that this is of no importance

my mind is full
but my stomach is empty
and im hungry for whats in yours

when you take off your face at night
and you look at the base in the mirror
do you see what you want
or a canvass

it just keeps getting thinner
the bone and the muscle hold it together
the sun bleaches and drys out the cover
and the world just wants to see more

so take off your clothes
and take off your face
show me your ribs
and stick out your tongue

i'll take out your stitches
if you like my wounds
and if you want to see flowers
you have to wait for the blooms


Re: sunset
Posted by: les712 (68.116.81.---)
Date: February 21, 2013 11:01PM

Good one Yuckster.


Les


Re: sunset
Posted by: frost42_24 (98.227.4.---)
Date: February 25, 2013 06:33PM

this one ROCKS. I love it.


Re: sunset
Posted by: les712 (68.116.81.---)
Date: February 25, 2013 11:10PM

You'd be amazed at what gems lie in the caverns of the 'mule.

Les




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