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short and sour
Posted by: Mr yuck (
Date: July 07, 2002 03:22PM

a chain is a system
cooperating with itself
negotiating the forces
keeping all the doors shut

no matter what they say
people tell secrets
dont believe a word
theres only so much a bird can say

Re: short and sour
Posted by: silent siren (
Date: July 07, 2002 05:54PM

The first one I seem to understand fully. I need time to get through to you.
And I think it is about the relationship between people holding a secret - and the chain breaks where is its weakest point...right?
guessing siren

Re: short and sour
Posted by: Mr yuck (
Date: July 08, 2002 01:14PM

pretty much :>

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