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My Place of Sanctuary
Posted by: Kelly Ann Malone (---.kp.org)
Date: June 26, 2002 08:49PM

"My place of Sanctuary"

Ever awed by your serenity
I enter this house and feel acceptance
You are pure love and peace

Unashamed of emotion, I cry as I feel your presence embrace me
I dip my fingers in the cool water that sooths my mortal wounds
My voice instinctively lowers in reverent respect

I belong here; you have made that clear from the beginning
You have accepted me with all my faults
All my fears
All my indiscretions

As a child I found you mystical
As an adult I find comfort and tenderness
Ever strong, ever glorious
You do not abandon
But rejoice in my presence

Your walls encapsulate joy
Your floors take the burden from my feet
Your pillars hold me up when I can no longer stand
Your windows burst with rays of hope

My place of sanctuary


Re: My Place of Sanctuary
Posted by: J.H. SUMMERS (---.proxy.aol.com)
Date: June 26, 2002 09:33PM

Kelly. Nicely written, and so expressive with your choice of words. jhs


Re: My Place of Sanctuary
Posted by: jazzy (---.charternc.net)
Date: June 28, 2002 12:17PM


Hi Kelly: smiling smiley

Outstanding translation of inspiration to page! Congrats on a truly fine work! winking smiley

Namaste,
Jazzy


Re: My Place of Sanctuary
Posted by: silent siren (---.ber.dial.de.colt.net)
Date: June 30, 2002 04:58AM

Fully agree...this is beautiful, too.
My, you rise in reputation!
siren


Re: My Place of Sanctuary
Posted by: Sue (---.dyn.optonline.net)
Date: July 19, 2002 01:04PM

Very nice piece of work it really touched me.


Re: My Place of Sanctuary
Posted by: Tim Smith (---.proxy.aol.com)
Date: July 27, 2002 05:18AM

Hey Kelly..Want to go out sometime?


Re: My Place of Sanctuary
Posted by: lgreen (---.client.attbi.com)
Date: July 27, 2002 02:05PM

Kelly: I could feel your inner peace--well done Kelly! lgreen winking smiley


Re: My Place of Sanctuary
Posted by: kelly (---.kp.org)
Date: July 27, 2002 03:56PM

Hey Tim, can I bring my husband??


Re: My Place of Sanctuary
Posted by: les712 (68.116.85.---)
Date: March 22, 2013 06:29PM

Nicely done, Kelly.

Les

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