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One More Chapter
Posted by: Mac O'Connor (---.summit.net)
Date: June 15, 2002 06:31PM

One more chapter




intruding or excepting
this is what?
looking over my shoulder
not denying my sanity
forever ago
it seams
now
slamming the door
directed at you
so nieve
so I don’t care
I been staring at my world
lately it seems almost surreal
having to keep myself informed
everyday
having to keep myself informed
when and without
nothen less than
nothen more than
everyone looks over my shoulder
deeper into my eyes
into eternity
you my never come back
looking away
knowing what you did
might really have
been right
I what to thank you
forever and a day ago too late
lots more to this
than this
it appears to me
defying fiction
into this little world of mine
with each indiviusal
pen stroke
over
and over
I quit life
I wont let my self die
I wont let
myself
let myself
die




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