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Missing You
Posted by: JP (---.essex1.com)
Date: June 13, 2002 12:13PM

I will go now,
To the land of no more smiles,
A place where there’s no more song,
Where grief, and tears, and longing
Enshroud me, all the day long.

And I will stay,
Locked in my prison of pain,
For the light that once was you.
Suddenly flickered, and died,
Briefer than the morning’s dew.

And I will come
When I hear you call my name.
Released from the bonds of pain,
The light so long extinguished,
Illumines the night again.


Re: Missing You
Posted by: J.H. SUMMERS (---.proxy.aol.com)
Date: June 13, 2002 07:39PM

JP, Another good one. So sad and lonely, but with a glimmer of hope at the end. jhs


Re: Missing You
Posted by: lgreen (---.client.attbi.com)
Date: June 13, 2002 11:50PM

JP--great poem--I also felt the sadness


Re: Missing You
Posted by: silent siren (---.dip0.t-ipconnect.de)
Date: June 16, 2002 09:23AM

Now I know...
siren


Re: Missing You
Posted by: Nolon (---.vp.centurytel.net)
Date: June 21, 2002 02:29AM

That was sad good poem

"To write something, you have to risk making a fool of yourself." Anne Rice


Re: Missing You
Posted by: les712 (68.116.85.---)
Date: March 22, 2013 06:41PM

JP you are dearly missed.

Les


Re: Missing You
Posted by: Boo Cipher (184.151.231.---)
Date: March 23, 2013 02:55AM

I commented here earlier, but it didn‘t take. JP is on my facebook. Her name, (which I generally wouldn‘t bandy about), is Jeanette Pruitt, and yes, she is still around.

John Summers is awol. He isn‘t showing up on any of my searches, which concerns me greatly. I really hope that he is okay.


Re: Missing You
Posted by: les712 (68.116.85.---)
Date: March 24, 2013 10:53AM

I believe JP had trouble logging on to the mule when the website was down a few years back. She like many others probably just got tired of trying to get through to us.


Les




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