Hello to all!
Here is another batch of poetry! Love your comments!
Today is the first day of all the rest to come,
And even if you lost today in the end you'll still have won
Life is not a race you see,
But a simple walk on the beach
It's not the destination that counts so much,
But what we learn to teach.
Glowing orb illuminating a night sky,
Heated spheres of passion slinking slowly across the heavens,
All washed away.
In a sea of color,
Ambition and apprehension paint the countryside.
How are you?
How am I today?
I radiate with light from within
My aura glows so bright
I shine like a star
Soaring high above those below
Upon the open sea
Into the heavens
Dance among the stars
So close, but so far
Hear me sing
Out into the open my voice, it rings.
I am melting away through this.
See most poems i write someone has to die or someone died but you write this creative touching poem with words that go well together and i really enjoyed i admit i had to read it twice my mind was else where but i loved it
"To write something, you have to risk making a fool of yourself." Anne Rice
I love swimming against the current, it is one of my greatest talents, and one of my greatest flaws. Last year my parents seperated and everything i wrote was hurt and confused, but I feel that I have over come that and now I write almost a little too perky! Nolon, I have read some of your work and it rocks! Silent siren, I love your work to! And i realy value both of your opinions!
perky is good---life is made up of tremendous sadness and tremendous joy and the mundane---all words need to be written to express---liked your work
It was nice to read something on the bright side. Your poetry actually gave me a much needed boost today. Thanks
I'm glad I could brighten your day!