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be sweet to me
Posted by: frost42_24 (67.160.36.---)
Date: November 13, 2011 02:03AM

the limbs are bare
exposed to the elements
vulnerable without
the cover of obvious beauty
shuddering at the slightest breath
and reachout out for shelter
in the season's embrace
swept up in the moment
and carried by the restlessness
of falling over and again


Re: be sweet to me
Posted by: petersz (67.188.236.---)
Date: November 14, 2011 03:40PM

frosty,

Nice piece. good to see you could get it out here,

amo et avanti,

Peter


Re: be sweet to me
Posted by: frost42_24 (67.160.36.---)
Date: November 14, 2011 05:28PM

thanks. you're being kind. we both know it's a little lame smiling smiley


Re: be sweet to me
Posted by: hpesoj (68.199.58.---)
Date: December 10, 2011 09:23PM

It's not lame at all. In fact, I think it is every bit a poem.

Joe


Re: be sweet to me
Posted by: frost42_24 (98.227.4.---)
Date: December 13, 2011 10:37AM

Thanks, Joe.


Re: be sweet to me
Posted by: frost42_24 (98.227.4.---)
Date: December 13, 2011 10:37AM

Thanks, Joe.




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