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Ashes
Posted by: petersz (67.174.197.---)
Date: September 08, 2011 09:58AM

Ashes

burning, burning.
the ashes keep burning
after the flame has gone down, some phoenix
sleeping in the woods, watching, waiting
hearing the echo of the wind
calling its name: Return. Return.


Re: Ashes
Posted by: petersz (67.174.197.---)
Date: September 08, 2011 10:11AM

Every poem s about poetry in one way or another.


Re: Ashes
Posted by: les712 (68.185.66.---)
Date: September 14, 2011 04:06PM

This reminds me of the many wild fires that have occurred this season. I believe mother nature is trying to tell us something.

Les


Re: Ashes
Posted by: petersz (67.174.197.---)
Date: September 14, 2011 06:01PM

That's right, Les.




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