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be-calming
Posted by: petersz (67.174.197.---)
Date: September 05, 2011 03:46PM

be-calming

my visions are low key
like background noise
or whatís happening
outside the circle of my focus

those whispers
turned into the angles of Picasso's
blue and white
lightning
long after the thunder

holding my finger
too long on the key
typing my name
when I meant to call out
to a bird flying by

before the interruption
I name: here

the flick of dust
on the page
before it blows away


Re: be-calming
Posted by: les712 (68.116.90.---)
Date: September 06, 2011 04:19PM

Sometimes I too feel like I must capture an idea on paper before it disappears, Pete. I like the message here.

Les




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