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calamity
Posted by: frost42_24 (67.160.36.---)
Date: August 23, 2011 11:19PM

you're a stranger to me
once so familiar
now distanced
morose
silenced and stagnant
in perpetual
disengagement
and pedaling
like mad
but getting nowhere


Re: calamity
Posted by: les712 (68.185.82.---)
Date: August 25, 2011 01:25PM

A good read, Frosty, especially the closing lines.

Les




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