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The Cure Does Not Work
Posted by: petersz (67.174.198.---)
Date: August 22, 2011 10:47AM

The Cure Does Not Work

A few days before the ice broke up
I lifted my head and looked into my brain.
The heat had risen so swiftly.
The coo coos could hardly sing.

I called and the wind came
From the mountains I would never visit.
Like a leaf I fell into myself,
Hoping to hide my misery

But it was all a dream
Waiting to end so the day
Could make its beginning.

Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 08/22/2011 11:52AM by petersz.


Re: The Cure Does Not Work
Posted by: les712 (68.185.64.---)
Date: August 30, 2011 02:13PM

A good read, Peter. Never mind the coo coos, listen to the ocean.

Les


Re: The Cure Does Not Work
Posted by: petersz (67.174.197.---)
Date: August 30, 2011 07:53PM

I guess that's good advice, Les, though I do love birdsong.

thanks for visiting,

Peter




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