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this is a poem about the things I donít know.
Posted by: petersz (67.174.198.---)
Date: August 18, 2011 01:07AM

this is a poem about the things I donít know.

I guess thatís alright to write about.

I also love
her independenceÖ
that lets her go off
by herself
after the demonstration

where she was going to go
before I came along
with her

and I know my own pain
is just what it is

not what I feel in my feet

Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 08/18/2011 01:09AM by petersz.


Re: this is a poem about the things I donít know.
Posted by: les712 (68.116.84.---)
Date: August 23, 2011 01:06PM

I like this Peter, we all do better when we're not didactic.

Les




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