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tannic acid and the metal teapot
Posted by: petersz (67.174.198.---)
Date: August 18, 2011 12:26AM

tannic acid and the metal teapot

where am I now?

the echoes talk to themselves
no silence left
Buddha laughs

vacant face
thatís what she saw
when she came to pick me up Ė
from across the intersection
sometimes I donít know how dead I am, , ,I look

into my own face


Re: tannic acid and the metal teapot
Posted by: les712 (68.116.86.---)
Date: August 18, 2011 02:19PM

I like the tone of these last two poems, Peter. New faces come into our lives all the time, changing our perspectives as they do.

Les

Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 08/18/2011 02:20PM by les712.


Re: tannic acid and the metal teapot
Posted by: petersz (67.174.198.---)
Date: August 18, 2011 04:52PM

yes, Les, I'm experimenting with letting the voices speak to me that start up in my mind until I learn what they have to say, even if someone else might say, "It's just your imagination/Running away with you."

amo et avanti,

Peter


Re: tannic acid and the metal teapot
Posted by: les712 (68.116.88.---)
Date: August 19, 2011 11:56AM

Without imagination, there would be no space travel, no i-phones, no art.


Les




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