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fishing
Posted by: larkinabout (109.153.174.---)
Date: July 30, 2011 09:57PM

The pond seemed glacial
the morning sullen, bored.
Not a reed or blade or branch
swayed.

I stood, half-huge against
the bank side,
craving cornucopia;
urging life.

A distant trainís rattle caused
an ephemeral sadness...
I rejoiced as a globe of air surfaced
echoing its explosion.

Seismic sounds on still mornings.


Re: fishing
Posted by: petersz (67.174.198.---)
Date: August 01, 2011 01:14AM

tight, lucid, actual


Re: fishing
Posted by: les712 (68.185.70.---)
Date: August 05, 2011 11:23AM

I like the feel for nature this poem expresses, nicely done.

Les




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