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Posted by: frost42_24 (67.160.36.---)
Date: July 26, 2011 12:50AM

the world looks different
by moonlight
softer
more serene
delivering

there are moments
in the darkness
where I actually feel beautiful
and I am grateful
to the moon


Re: abstract
Posted by: petersz (67.174.198.---)
Date: July 27, 2011 01:00AM

Sherry,

Your poem shows us a special place...where one's own beauty is revealed to the single person who it should matter most to: oneself! Thanks.

Peter


Re: abstract
Posted by: frost42_24 (67.160.36.---)
Date: July 27, 2011 01:05AM

thanks, Peter. Appreciate the comment.


Re: abstract
Posted by: les712 (68.185.70.---)
Date: August 05, 2011 11:25AM

Frosty, this is one of the strongest poems I've read by you. Good job with this one.

Les


Re: abstract
Posted by: frost42_24 (67.160.36.---)
Date: August 05, 2011 01:12PM

thanks, Les.




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