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missing someone
Posted by: Fickledlife (72.130.17.---)
Date: June 30, 2011 01:43AM

its like the sun missing the moon.

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they meet once every eclipse, and just for a glance, but its love. the sun gives her all his light freely, says take it all, its yours cuz i love you

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its one glance of adoring balance when light and dark are combined in the path of between.

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the earth is completely darkened and only the stage is lit so all people may enjoy their cosmic embrace.

-with love


Re: missing someone
Posted by: petersz (67.174.198.---)
Date: June 30, 2011 04:15AM

this I like.

Peter


Re: missing someone
Posted by: Fickledlife (72.130.17.---)
Date: July 02, 2011 12:42AM

it could use work.. but thank you, peter. glad to see youre still posting.

-with love




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