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To the poem born
Posted by: larkinabout (81.157.185.---)
Date: June 03, 2011 09:08PM

We are poems ourselves
conceived from emotion.

We are all born poets
yowling or uttering

our brutal stages of advance.
Dazed from the drop

we find our voice, or not;
From there, images flock

like birds of Assisi
or flail as spoiled pigeons would.


Re: To the poem born
Posted by: petersz (67.174.198.---)
Date: June 04, 2011 04:31AM

camus,

ah, we are so diverse
like the consonants and vowels
that make our verse.

I like all d them birds in your poem, even the scavenger, cranky, downtrodden ones from the public commons.

Peter


Re: To the poem born
Posted by: les712 (68.116.94.---)
Date: June 08, 2011 01:14PM

"Eight miles high and when you touch down, you'll find that it's stranger than known..." Roger McGuinn, Gene Clark, David Crosby


Les




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