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Posted by: frost42_24 (67.160.36.---)
Date: May 12, 2011 07:56PM

itís fleeting-
it is fleeting

I hear the flutter of flight
breeze by
almost forgotten
hurried

we are changing
so quickly
there is no time
for subtleties
I fear

we all lose track
of what is-
what was
right there

now gone
and wondering
where it went

we are treading
in currents
so strong

and tiring
for trying
to keep up

and it sweeps me away
like the drift wooded river
rushing out to sea


Re: today
Posted by: petersz (67.174.198.---)
Date: May 13, 2011 12:54AM

thanks for the reminder.
amo,

Peter


Re: today
Posted by: frost42_24 (67.160.36.---)
Date: May 13, 2011 04:22AM

Peter,

thanks for taking the time to read it. I appreciate the patronage...and the comment.

Sherry


Re: today
Posted by: les712 (68.116.88.---)
Date: May 13, 2011 12:30PM

Good one, Frosty, I especially like this part:

I hear the flutter of flight
breeze by
almost forgotten
hurried



Les


Re: today
Posted by: frost42_24 (67.160.36.---)
Date: June 24, 2011 06:14PM

thanks, Les.
Glad you enjoyed it.




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