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Poetry is a Dance
Posted by: aaron (69.30.71.---)
Date: May 12, 2011 03:31PM

poetry is a dance
every step a reaction
to an equal
changing of the way
it used to be
when we were still


Re: Poetry is a Dance
Posted by: petersz (67.174.198.---)
Date: May 13, 2011 12:42AM

yes, and as Yeats says, we can't always tell the dancer from the dance.

nice piece,

Peter


Re: Poetry is a Dance
Posted by: les712 (68.116.94.---)
Date: May 14, 2011 05:41AM

A nice little ditty, here, Aaron. Good to see you posting.

Les


Re: Poetry is a Dance
Posted by: larkinabout (81.157.185.---)
Date: June 03, 2011 09:09PM

Lots to think about here for such a short poem.

Nice one.


Re: Poetry is a Dance
Posted by: larkinabout (81.157.185.---)
Date: June 03, 2011 09:11PM

Lots to think about here for such a short poem.

Condensed.

Nice.


Re: Poetry is a Dance
Posted by: petersz (67.188.236.---)
Date: January 12, 2012 02:13PM

bump




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