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hello
Posted by: bxs (76.175.41.---)
Date: March 28, 2011 12:35AM

Hi, I'm totally new to this. I don't fancy myself a poet, haven't really read a lot of poetry, hell I'm not even sure what the definition and qualifying characteristics of a poem are. Nonetheless it seams to be somewhat therapeutic.

p.s. please don't rip me to shreds.


"Immeasurable loneliness"
or
"living a life that lacks your love"

Immeasurable loneliness
In a crowd bordering on infinity.

In a world where I can have anything,
I long for nothing but to have things the way they used to be.

I know not what tomorrow holds
my only constant is pain.

My last thought before I sleep....
I hope I won't wake up again.


Re: hello
Posted by: les712 (68.185.66.---)
Date: March 28, 2011 10:31AM

Welcome aboard, B.

Les


Re: hello
Posted by: Fickledlife (72.130.17.---)
Date: March 29, 2011 05:14PM

good little thought. i like the prologue/intro as much as the poem itself.

thanks for posting.

-with love


Re: hello
Posted by: petersz (67.174.198.---)
Date: August 14, 2011 01:31AM

bump




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