THE DARK SIDE OF THE MIRROR

When I tell her
On the phone
The sound of her voice
Surprised me
With how much I feel for her
She is still

MAKES REFLECTION POSSIBLE

A beautiful sentiment, Peter. Although, I'm not sure how the "Dark Side" fits in with this text.

Les

Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 01/06/2011 05:02PM by les712.

Les,

There are pluses and minuses to everything. Even the greatest blessing in our lives, love, is a mixed, hesitant blessing.

amo et avanti,

Peter

Bump...a poem that says so much with so few words. Excellent, Peter. Sorry I missed it first time through.

Joe

Thanks, Joe. The syntax of the poem, for me, mirrors the difficulty of the emotions.

Peter

amo et avanti