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What if
Posted by: petersz (67.174.198.---)
Date: September 01, 2010 05:17AM

What if
Archaic memory
And
Ritual behaviour
Occur
Out side
The causal connection
Karma
In the un-caused uni-verse?
...


Back toward the still surface
The albatross
Relents
A wave at a time.


Re: What if
Posted by: les712 (66.189.173.---)
Date: September 09, 2010 08:26PM

A good read, Peter. Probably my favorite of this last bunch you've posted.


Les


Re: What if
Posted by: petersz (67.174.198.---)
Date: September 11, 2010 02:08AM

Thanks, Les.

I have so much to learn...one moment at a time.

cheers,

Peter




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