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Evening Thoughts
Posted by: mg (64.12.116.---)
Date: December 29, 2009 12:23AM

It comes upon me suddenly
Grips me by the throat
And chokes before I know it,
The peace from out of me.
Bless cognizance,
And curse it too,
When day meets dusk
And memory sifted through
Leaves but one inauspicious thing--
Regret
For giving up and giving in

Edited 3 time(s). Last edit at 01/19/2010 10:43PM by mg.


Re: Evening Thoughts
Posted by: frost42_24 (67.174.129.---)
Date: December 30, 2009 12:36AM

this part:

When day meets dusk
And knowledge sifted through
Leaves but one inauspicious thing


ahhhhhhhhhhh


Re: Evening Thoughts
Posted by: mg (64.12.116.---)
Date: December 30, 2009 02:25AM

Thanks for reading and commenting Frost42_24. I'll assume "ahh" means you dislike it.. right? Sorry, couldn't get my thoughts across as clearly as desired.

mg




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