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Show Me The Way To Go Home
Posted by: Sensi Star (98.154.110.---)
Date: July 11, 2009 04:25AM

Show me the way to go home little darling,
I am tired and I want to go to bed.
Had a little drink about an hour ago,
And its gone right to my head.

Do you remember those days
When we used to play
All day out in the rain?

Would you smile or frown
To know that I am still around
Drowning in this small town?

Would you scream or cry
To know that I am just fine
With silent goodbyes?

Show me the way to go home little darling,
I am tired and I want to go to bed.
Had a little drink about an hour ago,
And its gone right to my head.

And Its Gone Right To My Head
And Its Gone Right To My Head Now

Do you remember the times
When we would unwind
And take a load off our minds?

Would you sigh or shout
To know what I'm all about
And the shit I could live without?

Would you stay or go
If I were to show you
All the things I know?

Show me the way to go home little darling,
I am tired and I want to go to bed.
Had a little drink about an hour ago,
And its gone right to my head.

And Its Gone Right To My Head
And Its Gone Right To My Head Now

Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 07/11/2009 04:33AM by Sensi Star.


Re: Show Me The Way To Go Home
Posted by: Mr. P (24.20.36.---)
Date: July 11, 2009 10:05AM

Welcome to the mule.


Re: Show Me The Way To Go Home
Posted by: les712 (68.116.90.---)
Date: July 11, 2009 10:55AM

I enjoyed the read Sensi, welcome aboard.

Les


Re: Show Me The Way To Go Home
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: July 11, 2009 01:24PM

Sensi Star,

Yes, I remember the little ditty you use for refrain, and i feel the pathos of the lonely drunk, and the feeling sorry of yourself [myself], taking the rain personally and wishing someone else would take me more personally singing my drunken song.

Thanks for making me feel bad. Nice work.

Cheers,

Peter


Re: Show Me The Way To Go Home
Posted by: Sensi Star (68.123.226.---)
Date: July 11, 2009 02:15PM

Thank you guys for the warm welcome. I am not new to the site, and have visited a couple times looking for inspiration, or a good read. I have enjoyed many poems from this form, so I figured I should register and maybe contribute a line or two. smiling smiley


Re: Show Me The Way To Go Home
Posted by: Mr. P (24.20.36.---)
Date: July 12, 2009 12:54AM

The more the merrier, make a fool of yourself, we do all the time.




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