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Snapshot
Posted by: hpesoj (69.116.241.---)
Date: May 06, 2009 07:45PM

Snapshot - A Portrait of our Times

Politicians serving up a pistachio pastiche
Of weary, weathered, woeful twaddle
While psychotic sycophants synchronize their salivation
Like demonic dogs over discarded droppings of decaying drivel.

Everybody say, "Cheese!"

Edited 3 time(s). Last edit at 05/07/2009 05:23PM by hpesoj.


Re: Snapshot
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: May 06, 2009 10:18PM

Joseph,

I do like this. I like it when you play with language.

Peter


Re: Snapshot
Posted by: les712 (68.185.64.---)
Date: May 07, 2009 12:38AM

Good one Joe, it's good to see that satire is not dead here at the mule.


Les

Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 05/07/2009 11:18AM by les712.


Re: Snapshot
Posted by: hpesoj (69.116.241.---)
Date: May 07, 2009 06:39AM

Peter and Les:

I'm just a kid at heart, I guess, always playing with whatever is at hand. Glad you both got the point.

Thanks.

Joe


Re: Snapshot
Posted by: easyeverett (97.125.165.---)
Date: May 07, 2009 06:16PM

Hey Joe, a fine alliterative example of temeritous truth.
Loved it my friend. tom


Re: Snapshot
Posted by: hpesoj (69.116.241.---)
Date: May 08, 2009 10:53AM

Appreciate it, Tom.


Re: Snapshot
Posted by: mg (205.188.116.---)
Date: May 10, 2009 09:37PM

smiling smiley I enjoyed this. Great.


Re: Snapshot
Posted by: hpesoj (69.116.241.---)
Date: May 11, 2009 06:31AM

Thank you for reading and responding, mg.

Joe




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