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The Balance
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: May 04, 2009 10:38PM

The Balance

Here’s the deal:
I had ta stay outa circulation
because I had a bad dream –
my friend hada stay out of circulation
to take his wife to the emergency room
at midnight. Do you think
I don’t know the difference?

Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 05/04/2009 10:41PM by petersz.


Re: The Balance
Posted by: les712 (68.185.64.---)
Date: May 11, 2009 01:38PM

Good one, Pete.

Les


Re: The Balance
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: May 11, 2009 07:32PM

Thanks, Les. It is very easy to get sucked into feeling one's own terrors greater than the common suffering of one's fellows.

avanti,

Peter




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