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tune
Posted by: obiwan (72.141.185.---)
Date: March 03, 2009 10:07PM

every love has a tune
first a sharp crescendo
rolling, rising to pastoral melody
of flute, harp, and violin
in unison they sing
in climatic glory
inevitably staccatoing


Re: tune
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: March 04, 2009 12:11AM

nice


Re: tune
Posted by: hpesoj (69.116.241.---)
Date: March 04, 2009 07:10AM

Yes, it is.


Re: tune
Posted by: mg (64.12.116.---)
Date: March 05, 2009 07:44PM

smiling smiley I enjoyed this.


Re: tune
Posted by: obiwan (72.141.185.---)
Date: March 05, 2009 08:03PM

many thanks smiling smiley


Re: tune
Posted by: les712 (68.116.92.---)
Date: February 15, 2010 06:12AM

very seasonal


Re: tune
Posted by: les712 (68.185.70.---)
Date: May 07, 2011 12:55PM

I often wonder what happens to the one time posters who seemingly just float in and float out of this forum. Many of them, including this one were pretty good poets.

Les


Re: tune
Posted by: petersz (67.174.198.---)
Date: August 14, 2011 01:27AM

I also wonder about the one timers.




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