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Posted by: JohnnyBoy (24.189.156.---)
Date: February 14, 2009 12:22AM

This bantering in transit
A feigned approach to wish and see
Proportionate forebodings
Of schism's inefficiency
When dreaming in the bleachers
In colors of the stormy sea's
Restraint and resolution
Remember where you hid the key


Re: Length
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: February 14, 2009 12:25AM

There may be nobody home when you get there.


Re: Length
Posted by: JohnnyBoy (24.189.156.---)
Date: February 14, 2009 12:25AM

The lights are on, though


Re: Length
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: February 14, 2009 12:26AM

So, at least you can peek in the window.


Re: Length
Posted by: JohnnyBoy (24.189.156.---)
Date: February 14, 2009 12:27AM

These things have a way of sorting themselves out


Re: Length
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: February 14, 2009 12:28AM

I know. Someone else comes by with the key to let us in.


Re: Length
Posted by: hpesoj (69.116.241.---)
Date: February 14, 2009 11:07AM

Isn't bantering prohibited in subway stations?


Re: Length
Posted by: Merc (75.210.232.---)
Date: February 14, 2009 11:03PM

That's pandering you're thinking of.




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