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Toxemia
Posted by: JohnnyBoy (68.194.80.---)
Date: August 29, 2008 09:57AM

A quest for the air that the firstborn inhaled
Descended it wound through deforested land
Yet secretly tasty for lovers impaled
And crammed with insidious phrases

An orthodox rebel, he’s resting assured
Amidst all the clusters of smug he'll pretend
That iconoclastics will never be bored
As long as there’s cheese in the mazes


Re: Toxemia
Posted by: les712 (68.116.84.---)
Date: August 29, 2008 04:06PM

Johnny, you shouldn't talk about the president like that.

What I like about McCain: He's a regular guy.

What I like about Obama: He listens very well.



Les


Re: Toxemia
Posted by: JohnnyBoy (24.189.158.---)
Date: August 29, 2008 07:11PM

well, it's not about that, but then again, it never is.


Thanks for always commenting Les, it is sincerely appreciated


Re: Toxemia
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: August 29, 2008 11:43PM

there's always been cheeses in the mazes,
cept Jeremy Bentham's Panoptocon,
where you have to act like you're,
whether you're watched or not


Re: Toxemia
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: August 29, 2008 11:44PM

the prison, it's more effective if you never see a guard in the prison


Re: Toxemia
Posted by: JohnnyBoy (24.189.158.---)
Date: August 30, 2008 12:22AM

Even more so when you don't know you're in one


Re: Toxemia
Posted by: frost42_24 (67.185.68.---)
Date: August 30, 2008 03:05AM

Yet secretly tasty for lovers impaled

this is my favorite line in the poem. Does that make me a sicko? hehe.

Good one.


Re: Toxemia
Posted by: JohnnyBoy (24.189.158.---)
Date: August 30, 2008 11:56AM

Thanks Sherry


Re: Toxemia
Posted by: redmitten (67.42.170.---)
Date: September 01, 2008 12:09PM

clusters of smug! i always look forward to your stuff, mr sans. fresh stuff.


Re: Toxemia
Posted by: JohnnyBoy (24.189.158.---)
Date: September 01, 2008 01:35PM

Thanks Mittens ! Good spot to zero in on !


Re: Toxemia
Posted by: OhDear (63.25.170.---)
Date: September 06, 2008 02:40AM

"insidious phrases" I love!

You've always baffled me, and I love it!

Cheers!

Ange


Re: Toxemia
Posted by: Merc (75.216.158.---)
Date: September 06, 2008 07:56PM

Obama is very intelligent and articulate
Biden has vast amounts of experience in government
McCain is a war hero, again a lot of government experience
Palin can field dress a moose.
I have bumper stickers on order: Palin for President 2012


Re: Toxemia
Posted by: JohnnyBoy (24.189.158.---)
Date: September 07, 2008 11:31AM

Terry:
worst.....limerick......ever

Keeper ! ! ! ! ! Good to see you back


Re: Toxemia
Posted by: les712 (68.116.85.---)
Date: October 02, 2011 01:50PM

A fun bit of frivolity from Johnny Sans.

Les




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