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Spinnings
Posted by: petersz (24.7.62.---)
Date: August 24, 2007 02:48AM

Spinnings

I make of a girl, spinnings:

She came with gum
in her mouth --
waiting the day with
saliva.

In her eye, off-hand,
marvelous, cherished, for her
uniqueness, her innocence
always full in her smile.

And I laughed, inside,
with her.

01/07


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Re: Spinnings
Posted by: les712 (66.189.172.---)
Date: April 14, 2013 02:13AM

Nicely done, Pete.

Les


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