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Potty
Posted by: dawlypaul (81.105.18.---)
Date: August 04, 2007 03:12AM

I am a flying tea pot,
flying through the air.
I'll often be around (but I'm sometimes sort of square),
It's not that I'm a prude,
just that I'd rather be in fact:
A round that's sort of square,
and not triangular or flat...
(you know - like a tea bag..)

Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 09/29/2008 11:31PM by dawlypaul.


Re: Potty
Posted by: petersz (24.7.62.---)
Date: August 04, 2007 05:09AM

haha...welcome


Re: Potty
Posted by: JohnnyBoy (24.45.167.---)
Date: August 04, 2007 06:51AM

Apt choice.....just ran across some old Gong posters


"They got a Flying Teapot, don't need a taxi
I am - you are - we are - crazy !
They're from the planet of love, the Pot Head Pixies
I am - you are - we are - crazy !
Ding dang dong, singing the song, it's pretty catchy
I am - you are - we are - crazy !
They just can't give you enough, the Pot Head Pixies
I am - you are - we are - crazy !

Be there ! Be aware ! Be there ! See you there !
Open on Saturday seven to nine "

Daevid Allen - Gong - Flying Teapot


Re: Potty
Posted by: Steevo (69.19.14.---)
Date: August 04, 2007 09:20AM

dawlypaul (I knew a Paul Dawly once, but surely that's not...)

Posting a piece of work like this will (I regret to say) make you very popular. Well, at least popular with me. I hope that more will appear.


Re: Potty
Posted by: redmitten (71.32.22.---)
Date: August 04, 2007 11:21AM

welcome. stick a round.


Re: Potty
Posted by: UPMarty (24.247.69.---)
Date: August 05, 2007 12:42AM

Gotta love it! Welcome, dawlypaul.

Marty


Re: Potty
Posted by: Merc (70.193.26.---)
Date: August 08, 2007 12:13AM

Mee too Dawly... mee too.

Since Kellygirl, and JP have entered retirment, Johnny and I are amongst the very few who try to rhyme.

Nice read.


Re: Potty
Posted by: petersz (67.188.236.---)
Date: January 12, 2012 03:14PM

bump




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