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Devolution
Posted by: JosephT (192.168.128.---)
Date: October 10, 2006 05:44PM

Devolution
(A Nursery Rhyme for the 21st Century)

Ten thousand trees crudely hewn in a dell,
Waste-water washing away down a well,
Geneticists coolly mutating a cell,
The Garden of Eden transformed into Hell.



Devolution: (noun) biology - loss of function: The gradual loss of the biological function, specialization, or adaptation of a part of the body over many generations.


Re: Devolution
Posted by: JohnnySansCulo (192.168.128.---)
Date: October 10, 2006 06:02PM

and a pretty good album by Devo, if i recall correctly !

and a pretty good rhyme by Joe as well !


Re: Devolution
Posted by: hrfarris (192.168.128.---)
Date: October 10, 2006 09:32PM

excellent. Holly


Re: Devolution
Posted by: Marty (192.168.128.---)
Date: October 10, 2006 09:46PM

Good job, Joe. As they say, "to hell in a hand basket".

Marty


Re: Devolution
Posted by: lg (Moderator)
Date: October 11, 2006 12:34AM

The Garden of Eden transformed into Hell.

That's the one that really hurts.


Les


Re: Devolution
Posted by: JosephT (192.168.128.---)
Date: October 11, 2006 07:46AM

Johnny, Holly, Mary, and Les:

Thanks for your comments. Every once in awhile my ecological muse pays a visit and I can't shake her off until I write at least a couple of lines. Glad you approve.

Joe


Re: Devolution
Posted by: johnniegirl (192.168.128.---)
Date: October 11, 2006 11:06AM

joe

this poem says it all for me. well done!


Re: Devolution
Posted by: JP (192.168.128.---)
Date: October 11, 2006 12:42PM

Too true Joe.

JP


Re: Devolution
Posted by: JosephT (192.168.128.---)
Date: October 11, 2006 06:08PM

Red and JP:

Thanks for reading and commenting...unfortunately it is much too true.

Joe


Re: Devolution
Posted by: frosty (192.168.128.---)
Date: October 12, 2006 09:35PM

I'm usually not in to rhyming poems. This one was cool...and sadly, true.


Re: Devolution
Posted by: J.H.SUMMERS (192.168.128.---)
Date: October 12, 2006 10:59PM

Joe,

Good job...and all too true.

John


Re: Devolution
Posted by: JosephT (192.168.128.---)
Date: October 13, 2006 07:28AM

Frosty and John:

Thanks for reading and for your comments.

Joe


Re: Devolution
Posted by: K.Q. (192.168.128.---)
Date: October 13, 2006 06:30PM

I like the title and the poem just fulfills the expectations crted by your title. Very brief but rich. Good one Joe!


Re: Devolution
Posted by: JosephT (192.168.128.---)
Date: October 14, 2006 07:53AM

Thank you, Khalida.


Re: Devolution
Posted by: hpesoj (68.199.58.---)
Date: April 30, 2013 10:13AM

Bump. After all, it is still April and I'm pretty sure Earth Day will soon be forgotten for another year as it usually is.

Joe


Re: Devolution
Posted by: petersz (50.136.226.---)
Date: April 30, 2013 02:47PM

Monday, April 29, 2013Monday, April 29, 20134/29/2013April 29, 20134/29/132013-04-2929-Apr-1329 April 2013April 13Apr-134/29/2013 10:38 AM4/29/2013 10:38 AM4/29/2013 10:38:15 AM10:38 AM10:38:26 AM10:3810:38:36 The time it repeats itself

Got to keep it alive, every day, a little at a time, JOe


Re: Devolution
Posted by: hpesoj (68.199.58.---)
Date: April 30, 2013 03:03PM

Indeed.


Re: Devolution
Posted by: Gwydion2 (75.157.137.---)
Date: April 30, 2013 09:24PM

blunt and true...I like it.




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