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Posted by: wicked (---.nas10.nashville1.tn.us.da.qwest.net)
Date: May 08, 2005 11:06AM

~
pardon the grey,
my antiquated soul-
illumination seems
to wear upon me.
unborn happiness
welcome & needed-
complete with
a twisted reaction.
as if my body
warrents rejection-
i can only
smile & bleed...


~

wicked

~
_________________
"Thou art to me a delicious torment-"
~Ralph Waldo Emerson


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Re: grey
Posted by: lg (---.dhcp.trlk.ca.charter.com)
Date: May 08, 2005 12:15PM

You seem to capture the soul here, Wicked. A good read.


Les


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Re: grey
Posted by: wicked (---.nas10.nashville1.tn.us.da.qwest.net)
Date: May 09, 2005 07:58PM

Thanx, Les-



wicked


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Re: grey
Posted by: les712 (68.116.85.---)
Date: April 03, 2013 02:53AM

I can't believe no one else commented on this one.


Les


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