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Her poems make you
Posted by: peternsz (---.client.comcast.net)
Date: July 27, 2004 03:39PM

Her poems make you part of your past.

Ccomment, either in prose, of in three to five line linked verse, like waka in haibun?


Re: Her poems make you
Posted by: peternsz (---.client.comcast.net)
Date: July 27, 2004 03:42PM

She writes me a sunrise.
I give her a laugh.
We both run down the garden path.


Re: Her poems make you
Posted by: Johnny SansCulo (---.nycmny83.covad.net)
Date: July 27, 2004 04:00PM

I find myself aging backwards
as the future affects the past
far and close and there not here


Re: Her poems make you
Posted by: peternsz (---.client.comcast.net)
Date: July 31, 2004 12:59AM

They either kill or resurrect you.


Re: Her poems make you
Posted by: JohnnySansCulo (---.dyn.optonline.net)
Date: July 31, 2004 02:47AM

Holy Viagra and resurrection, Batman !


Re: Her poems make you
Posted by: Jordan (---.coj.net)
Date: July 31, 2004 05:18PM

look closer, perhaps for a shoulder to lean
refusing to close your eyes
no matter how death beckons your eternal slumber.


Re: Her poems make you
Posted by: peternsz (---.client.comcast.net)
Date: July 31, 2004 07:28PM

You tell me more about my words than I knew, thenx.

Peter




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Re: Her poems make you
Posted by: Marian-NYC (---.nyc1.dsl.speakeasy.net)
Date: August 04, 2004 08:37PM


Once I was just a guy she hated,
but now I'm the guy
in "Heartbreak Poem #12."




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