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Just starting to write
Posted by: SadDonna (---.cg.shawcable.net)
Date: March 30, 2004 12:24AM

Hey I wrote this poem..it's kind of a first effort writing one. I was so full or sorrow and rage. Tell me some imput.

Words of Love all Lies!

Why havenít you called?
I thought you loved me,
I wanted to be with always,
But were your words just lies?

Itís like an addiction
Craving the absolution,
You love it, but itís bad for you.
ending my final illusion

How could I fall so deeply?
It was stupidity on my part
Leaving my heart in the open,
Letting your coldness burn a mark.

I cry such sorrow for not what was lost,
But for realizing the reality
And that my dreams were only mine.
For the same path of light you did not see.

I tried, and gave my full all
But your words were full of nonsense,
Wanting my ears to believe your expressions
Trusting my heart, which grew so dense.

I was slowly drowning in this hot black tea
Gasping for someone to help me,
The burns just sank, burrowed so deep
Iím lost forever in my tears of the sea.

Is this just another cruel life lesson?
My now harden heart will never believe again
For now the future has so many unknowns
In such upsetting times I hope to mend.

I will never again believe such words of love
For they are only words, actions must follow through
I will never trust my heart to anyone
Now I will have a close-minded view.

Donna


Re: Just starting to write
Posted by: -Les- (---.trlck.ca.charter.com)
Date: March 30, 2004 12:52AM

Donna, you need to post this on the User Submitted Poetry forum.

Les




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