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This Spring - EE Cummings
Posted by: Alexi (217.52.139.---)
Date: December 13, 2003 07:31PM


This Spring - EE Cummings

Is this a poem to end all poems?
It certainly seens to be a "good one"
Slightly uncertain, would value your opinions.


Alex


Re: This Spring - EE Cummings
Posted by: -Les- (---.trlck.ca.charter.com)
Date: December 13, 2003 11:51PM

This one?

III

Spring is like a perhaps hand
(which comes carefully
out of Nowhere)arranging
a window,into which people look(while
people stare
arranging and changing placing
carefully there a strange
thing and a known thing here)and

changing everything carefully

spring is like a perhaps
Hand in a window
(carefully to
and fro moving New and
Old things,while
people stare carefully
moving a perhaps
fraction of flower here placing
an inch of air there)and

without breaking anything.

eecummings



Although this poem is good, I prefer Anyone lived in a pretty how town...


Les


Re: This Spring - EE Cummings
Posted by: StephenFryer (---.l1.c3.dsl.pol.co.uk)
Date: December 14, 2003 04:18AM

I love the sonnets so much, too, especially:

it may not always be so; and i say
that if your lips, which i have loved, should touch
another's, and your dear strong fingers clutch
his heart, as mine in time not far away;
if on another's face your sweet hair lay
in such a silence as i know, or such
great writhing words as, uttering overmuch,
stand helplessly before the spirit at bay;

if this should be, i say if this should be-
you of my heart, send me a little word;
that i may go unto him, and take his hands,
saying, Accept all happiness from me.
Then shall i turn my face, and hear one bird
sing terribly afar in the lost lands.

This became my saviour when my first wife found somebody else ...

Stephen


Re: This Spring - EE Cummings
Posted by: Alexi (---.in-addr.btopenworld.com)
Date: December 24, 2003 06:28AM

Stephen

Sorry to hear about your first wife, hope you're over her now.
If I have a headache I take an asprin. Poetry can be a bit of a headache I don't find it particularly comforting , for me poetry is more about understanding. I love the sonnet you posted though but what I don't understand is how it gave you reassurance. Please explain, if you feel that you would like to.

Seasons Greetings!

Alexi


Re: This Spring - EE Cummings
Posted by: StephenFryer (---.l1.c2.dsl.pol.co.uk)
Date: December 24, 2003 07:58AM

It taught me that it is OK to accept the inevitable.
Then, it taught me that it is healing to embrace the inevitable.
Life seemed like hell, then.
Now, I am remarried with three stepdaughters and nine grandchildren.
I enjoy their unconditional love.
So, my pain was worth it. cummings made me see that it might be so. And it was.

Stephen




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