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Someone moveing that you care for.
Posted by: Trav. (---.cybrzn.com)
Date: May 29, 2003 10:45PM

Some body you care for.That does all most every thing with you.From little kids to third grade and the person how been with you all that time then that person has to move then you realize that you love the person and your sad for a long. Then you meat some body that talk to that person and you be came friends. Then that person that you gave you some inporton messege and you couldn't stop thing about it. THE END


Please tell me if this is go when you read it.This is true.


Re:trav
Posted by: MK (---.cybrzn.com)
Date: May 30, 2003 12:38AM

that is realy good you know that


Re:trav
Posted by: Les (---.trlck.ca.charter.com)
Date: May 30, 2003 01:35AM

Trav, this is not bad. How old are you? You need to correct some of the spelling mistakes here.

Also, poems like this should be posted under the heading USER SUBMITTED POETRY.

Good start. Keep writing.

Les

p.s. Tell MK and ER that this forum is not just for private conversations, ok.


Re:trav
Posted by: er (205.213.111.---)
Date: May 30, 2003 09:58AM

Hey les what grade r u in but i hve the same problem like trav. him and i r in 5th grade we go to school together well anyway a girl named alsa moved away before i could say goodbye and this is last time i can talk on here till September 2nd 2003 bye.


Re:trav
Posted by: er (205.213.111.---)
Date: May 30, 2003 10:01AM

oh! trav mk and me(er) trav. is 12 in 5th grade mk is 12 5th grade er 11 5thgrade Good bye!


Re: Someone moveing that you care for.
Posted by: desire (211.75.91.---)
Date: May 31, 2003 10:59AM

Yeah, this is good. I understand the feeling. Thanx for your comment on my poem.
-desire




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